Clanking sounds and shuffling feet,
honking horns and angry voices.
Metal and cement, glass and lead,
All is fast, yet so dead.
Dew and mist, bees and birds,
dawn and dusk, leaves and trees
people meet and birds tweet,
All is scarce, yet so sweet.
My mind wants these and not whats there
If there's a way to getting it, do tell me where.
i love the first 2 paras. keep it that way - impersonal yet personal.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Anks here.
ReplyDeleteBut i liked the last bit the most.
Shows that the mind isn't that bad. It still is searching for the good, unfortunately without knowing the path to it, but knowing that the path still exists, and hoping that the path will show itself !
Nice one, i liked it Divoooos.
Cheers
hmm i like that! hope the path shows itself for you bunny :)
ReplyDeletethankyou! :)
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